Esther Sylvester

Thank you! You both helped a lot. KD, thank you for warning me about plot drag. I am a little aware of it, but I wasn't sure if I was ...

Author's note: This is the seventh chapter to my romance novel. Enjoy! :) CHAPTER SEVEN, A (minor) breakthrough. Anita sat at Alex’s bedside, holding a book in her hands. To ...

Hey Ikafe! I am back once again for a review! (Story spoilers abound!) So, you have yet another novel in the works! Are you working on your others? Sometimes it ...

Hi there! I am Esther and I will be reviewing you today. Interesting piece here. Your writing style is very unique and fluent, albiet a bit forced sometimes. I have ...

Hey there! Esther Sylvester here for a review. Good job here. This piece is a little short, but the description is lovely and the flow is good. I see the ...

Hey, KD! Nice work once again, I really must say. You are really talented. PICTURE ONE: I like this picture a lot. My favorite parts are the hair and the ...

Hey there! Esther Sylvester is here for another review. Mmkay, so this was good. I like the main character's (let's call her MC)voice a lot, although she could stand to ...

Hey firefly! Esther here for a review! Wow, the world that you have set up is fantastic. I am a huge fan of mythology so this prologue really called to ...

Hey there! Here's Esther for another review! I liked this one even better than the first! The pacing is much improved and you capture the dark tone better and more ...

Thank you very much!

Hola! I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today! FIRST OFF: I like it! :) I'll cover the parts I didn't really like later in the review, but I'm ...

You're welcome. Looking back, I just felt that it had an air of poetic mystery and predestination. The ending with the man/young man leaving at the end without giving a ...

Welcome to YWS! It is a pleasure to have another writer with us. I hope you come to enjoy it here as much as I have. I read your short ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS! I am Esther, and I will be reviewing you today. I saw you on the welcome board so I decided to check you work ...

Nice meeting you too! I hope you enjoy it here. You're a really good writer. I reviewed what you wrote. 8)